Unseen Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

Unseen Love.

Rating: 3.0


Life spins with a dynamic throb,
Assailing our senses, vibrates from above
And below, be-speaking great care
Used in land, sea and air,

Love exhibits unseen, wisdom so grand
Giving love's evidence, very well planned.

Yearly renewing of green leafy tree
Resulting in nurture we cannot but see.

Newly born offspring of animal-kind
Needing care for survival, many born blind.

Star-bursts of power, showering
Brilliance, hour after cloudless night hour.

Marvels of miniscule petals encompassing
Thousands of statements of Love we call 'flower'

Expressions of God-love shown by the flight
Honed to perfection in birds of the night.

Could it be that the cream of creation, humanity,
Uses one day it's trait of humility.
Looks closer, discerns the intelligent design
Universally used by a Love that's Divine.?




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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Balch 13 September 2008

this is a very well worked piece with great meaning,10 for you Fay, Tom

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Bob Blackwell 11 September 2008

What you write is true, love is beauty, beauty love, truth is beauty, beauty true love and love true beauty. 10/10 well done Fay. L Bob

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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