Unspoken Revelations To The Lady In The Off-Licence Poem by Not Long Left

Unspoken Revelations To The Lady In The Off-Licence

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Every morning with heavy eyes,
I place my ultra strengh chemicaly
cold can, upon the length of the counter.
She always catches my stare,
holding it for a second,
stripping my disguise open and bare.

Every night, just after six thirty,
just as the sky becomes dirty
black and goulish grey,
I make my way to the fridge.
Always taking time at the soft
drink section, but knowing
I will move with unhurried
perfection, to the fridge
where the strong drinks wait,
such couloured cold bait.

Again at the counter she
steals a confession,
I am more truthful to her,
than I am to my wife.
For she sees and sells my pain.
and I come back, again and again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chaos . 09 March 2006

I've got a girl like that. Only she serves espresso from a tiny box in a parking lot and has captured my heart with eyes that pierce to the bone. You are lucky. I like your pome and keep the spell-checker off.

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