Untitled Poem by Saray Brunette

Untitled

Rating: 5.0


Fear-
what lies beneath the
pink bras black thongs empty bottles of Tylenol with sleep aide drug induced unconsciousness
leaky pens torn out pages of a journal used-to-be-fluffy-towels broken razors
i didn't make the commitment
im still here the mess is still here

if i pick everything up
will I find evidence?
that this room used to be clean
organized
achieving
sane?
or even worse.
Nothing?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 07 November 2009

You poured your feelings out good job

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Quin Faas 04 November 2009

Deep poem. i find many, many, meanings in this piece. Well done. Like how you've left it untitled-yet Fear is the first word.

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Saray Brunette

Saray Brunette

Green Bay, Wisconsin
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