Untitled Poem by Saray Brunette

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Rating: 5.0


Fear-
what lies beneath the
pink bras black thongs empty bottles of Tylenol with sleep aide drug induced unconsciousness
leaky pens torn out pages of a journal used-to-be-fluffy-towels broken razors
i didn't make the commitment
im still here the mess is still here

if i pick everything up
will I find evidence?
that this room used to be clean
organized
achieving
sane?
or even worse.
Nothing?

Wednesday, November 4, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: pink
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 07 November 2009

You poured your feelings out good job

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Quin Faas 04 November 2009

Deep poem. i find many, many, meanings in this piece. Well done. Like how you've left it untitled-yet Fear is the first word.

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Saray Brunette

Saray Brunette

Green Bay, Wisconsin
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