Untitled Poem by A.J. McKinley

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I walked a road of confusion
That winded through my tears
It forked with a disillusion
That spread between my fears

It sang a song of silence
That my ears have never heard
It laced through my memories
Though I uttered not a word

Copyright 2006 A.J. McKinley

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Ivan Donn Carswell 27 October 2006

This is enjoyable verse, but I have to be pedantic. Did you literally mean 'winded' or was the word supposed to be 'wound' in the second line, first stanza?

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A.J. McKinley

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Indiana, United States
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