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I wanted a simple life with him.
Barefoot,
nights under the stars,
watching,
breathing in the silence.
An honest love.
Tenderness.
That look that he had,
that said without words
that he understood

and all would be alright.
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Chuck Petz 08 November 2008

Don't know much about the formality of poetry, but this one made me weak in the knees and sobbing in my hanky.If you knew me you would know what high praise this is.

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Jerry Hughes 22 July 2006

Thank you Debra, for four truly wonderful poems. More please?

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Scarborough Gypsy 24 March 2006

You are a true and wonderful poet. Again, you have delivered another beautiful piece. Just one little thing, that you might want to look at: - 'That look that he had that said without words' for me would read better like this 'That look that he had, that said without words' Otherwise, it is a perfect read. What a pleasure to meet you. Kind regards Gyp's

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Scarlett Treat 23 March 2006

Debra, you must have loved him very much, because I too have lost a love like that, and I know how it feels. Good work, Scarlett

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