Jhane Reyes

Rookie - 6 Points (March 18 / Philippines)

Untitled - Poem by Jhane Reyes

Dying in pain feel through my vein
Doubts and fears start to reign
Happy and hurting memories still remain
This silly fate makes me insane

Now look above and talk the moon
That keep in shining while heart in mourn
A song of dawn can mend it soon
And bring back the life that wrecked and torn

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  • (5/15/2011 10:11:00 PM)

    Nice rythmic flow. Awesome work. Great imagery with nice style.
    Great write indeed.
    I rate it 10.
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 15, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, May 16, 2011

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