Sunday, August 24, 2008

Untouched Comments

Rating: 4.6

They'd meet at dusk above the city,
above the filth, above the wrath,
two gallant souls among the greedy,
so close as if they had one heart.
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Infenity Covett
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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

Wonderful love poem, lovely, enjoyed.10++. Still then metaphysical may be more apposite!

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Manonton Dalan 17 September 2008

platonic at it's best. beautiful.(plato-plate; tonic-drinks) they just share food for the mind and body maybe. thanks for sharing.md.

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Kefentse Sathekge 03 September 2008

lovely poem. i am taken by the choice of words to describe how he never touched her. amazing. i love it :)

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Greenwolfe 1962 02 September 2008

An interesting story, and worth reading. I recommended it. GW62

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