Unveil Poem by Baharak Barzin

Unveil

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Unveil this love
For there is no time for us
Let foes feel our mourns
Unveil this love
For there is no place for us
Let people see our sad ecstasy
Unveil this love
For there is no life for us
Let our lives shout our untold will
Unveil this love
For there is no chance for us
Let our souls melt our last kiss
Unveil this love
Let it go and Let it cry our last dying hope

Thursday, December 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 26 April 2017

This is a kind of Romeo and Juliet scenario: the speaker of the poem finds only opposition and frustration in the world. She doubts their true love could survive intact in such a corrupting atmosphere. That's the bitter truth. Their love, however real and lasting, is not strong enough to change the world, but the world might change them. What they need is a sanctuary or a community of like-minded people.What the worlds needs is their presence as a model of healhy love.

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Siddartha Montik 16 December 2016

lovely lines.. almost lost in the feel! For there is no place for us Let people see our sad ecstasy ', , No please poet! ! touching a sense! Thank you! 10+++

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