Saturday, August 22, 2009

Unwinding My Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Setting down with paper and a pen,
Carefully unwinding my thoughts,
Faintly hearing myself think-I listen
And find the tape is somehow caught...
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Romeo Della Valle
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without a name Face 09 August 2011

yes, i agree with Marilyn... i love how you make your mind seem like a DVD player, something that's concept everyone can understand, and you make that relate to your mind, and your thoughts, in such a manner that i have no words to describe how i feel. thankyou

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Marilyn Lott 07 August 2011

Ah yes, the perfect way to describe the thoughts and life of a writer. Excellent. I put a 10 but it does not show up. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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