Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 400,089 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Up And Down - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

One, two, three
Three, two and one
Up and down
Up and down

Nothing is known
Till you own
Your mistakes and folly
Then you will enjoy wholly

Who are we as an individual?
Take it normal and causal
There shall be only acceptance
No refusal even at once

So down you fall
But respond to positive call
Go up again
With no more pain


Comments about Up And Down by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/16/2012 3:17:00 AM)


    Some Girl
    The power of forgiveness and the Lord's prayer! Lovely
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/16/2012 1:08:00 AM)


    So down you fall
    But respond to positive call
    Go up again
    With no more pain
    - always lovely
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/16/2012 12:50:00 AM)


    One, two, three
    Three, two and one
    Up and down
    Up and down
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 16, 2012


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