Upside Down Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Upside Down

Rating: 5.0


The river seems deep,
could I drown in it?
The sky is asleep,
shall I rest in it?

If the tree is alive
will I grow with it?
When the road wanders on
can I travel forever?

Sally Plumb

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 28 May 2013

A beautiful poem with a great flow to it.

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SallyP. P. 15 December 2019

Thank you for your very kind comment.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 July 2010

Please don’t drown …not sleep… [We want you moreeeeeeeeeee] better ‘ When the road wanders on/can I travel forever? ~ Wander like a Lust auf Reisen –German. ~ 'desire for traveling'......for Poetry … thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 Please keep our upside up not down heh...heh.. n

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Sally P. P. 29 May 2020

Thanks for your comment, Niv.

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