Valentine Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Valentine

Rating: 5.0


Look at my face.
What do you see?
It's cracked with life,
times gift to me.

My teeth are unpearly,
my hairs worn quite rough,
unruly's the body,
feet corned and tough.

And what of my spirit?
It's strong and it's true.
We've had many crisis'
but I'm still here with you.

Sally Plumb

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 23 February 2012

wooo...wow. the strength of spirit and body so well expressed...i so remembered ....'Tis not in mortals to command success, But we'll do more, Sempronius, - We'll deserve it. - Joseph Addison, Cato (act I, sc.2) .... blessed be...fab lines there.. :) sat

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John Thorkild Ellison 01 February 2011

Very touching and well expressed. Love, John.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 June 2010

‘..my spirit? /It's strong and it's true.’ Yea that’s the spirit...esprit…… thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Muhammad Ali 23 April 2009

If not go poetic........ is it the true confidence! ! ! ? then i can bet you are the one for Him! nice poem friend 10

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Haverhill Suffolk England
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