MaddiiAnne O'Leary

Rookie (18th July 1995 / Crescent Head)

Ur Close But Ur Not There... - Poem by MaddiiAnne O'Leary

You stand there;
Like you want to be near me...
But your actions;
They tell me you don't...

Your eyes tell me;
Tell me that you care...
But your words;
They tell me that you don't...

Your stance tells me;
Tells me that you're comfortable...
But your body language;
That tells me you want to run from me...

You stand there;
Stand there as if you want to be close...
But the emotions that cross your face;
They tell me that you're not there in the present;
You're in the past instead...


Comments about Ur Close But Ur Not There... by MaddiiAnne O'Leary

  • (5/15/2011 11:52:00 PM)


    Awesome work. Great imagery with nice style.
    Great write indeed.
    I rate it 10.
    TFS.
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 15, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, May 16, 2011


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