Us Against Everyone Else Poem by Maya Hershey

Us Against Everyone Else

Rating: 5.0


Oh love, you are just not aware,
of what this leads to or to where,
I tried my best to be true and fair,
but it seems that love is a game of truth or dare,
Is it? .. or we just can't reach up there,
where everyone else stands up and stares,
It's just that I can't take or bare,
how everyone else furiously glares,
I'm helpless honey, come save me and verse,
these feelings against me and this curse,
of love upon his passion towards hers,
and this unbreakable obsession but yet absurd,
while again we are asked to redeem our blares,
and sins that yet haven't been done and won't occur,
but can we dislodge them from ahead?
when it's just us against everyone else...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 30 May 2009

dont be slow adding new poems..while you know that you can write very goood poems.. and thanks for comments, thats so small.. while i need litle long you did before..and they are already added to my new book hope you never stop doing it to get more space... respect you.... best poetry friend

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Afzal Shauq 15 May 2009

again a roamnitic and interesting poem..means you are a good poet with rich ides..like it..sure you will like my poems too which are love based peace... you got 10++++

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Muhammad Ali 13 April 2009

It is clear love-infection.......... but it is a very nice poem friend 10

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Muhammad Ali 13 April 2009

It is clear love-infection.......... but it is a very nice poem friend 10

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