Thursday, September 25, 2008

Useless Science Comments

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day u left me alone my teacher says:

water kill fire, we know it for sure
and tear is water with some elements more
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negar shahnouri
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Rico Avila 18 January 2009

Wow. It seems every poem of your I read, I like more than the one befire. This on is excellent... love it.

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Kassem Oude 27 November 2008

If I were your teacher.., he left you because he would be ignorant and worthless. sensible soul and writing.

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Debaish Tewary 08 November 2008

U know how to explore a philosophy from a simple matter.

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Seth Mutau 30 October 2008

hahahaha short beautiful and a very funny poem...nice one

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Anna jonson 26 September 2008

short and beautiful.....good poem

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Greenwolfe 1962 25 September 2008

Another good example of properly written poetry . I recommend it . Short and direct and concise. GW62

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