Vacancy Poem by Carolyn Brunelle

Vacancy

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An absence
a vacancy;
an empty hole
where nothing
fills
what nothing
ever can.

What could have been
lies unfulfilled,
unlearned,
unknown.

What is,
is left to struggle,
unaware in its
diminished capacity
that it barely survives;
as the world that
should never have been,
creates a half-life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 28 September 2008

Enrapturing.....major diggage, Carolyn. You've opened my eyes to new insight with this.....The glass half-empty becomes the glass half-filled. keep on, goldy

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Shaun William Hayes 09 July 2008

Poignant words Carolyn. Even the fulfillment is transient, and mourned, but perhaps our souls learn more sometimes through lack as we think more on this and learn its wisdom. You inspire me for one : o) Shaun.

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