Valentine In My Definition Poem by Elorm Dogbo

Valentine In My Definition

Rating: 4.5


in my definition, it is
a season
like this
as i will show
someone but not anyone great love
like you

in my deinition, it is
a reason
to at least
epitomise Juliet and Romeo
in a Shakespearan love
with you

in my definition, it is a
a feeling
by which
the roses show
like the one i have
for you

in my definition, it is
something
i believe
will make my sadness go
because of the presence of the love
from you

in my definition,
you are my valentine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Gordley 13 February 2008

I respectfully disagree with the previous comment. This is beautiful and soft it reads almost like the prayer of a lover. Thanks for sharing this.

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Shikha Sharma 13 February 2008

romeo and juliet are the exaggeration of the idea of love.poetry these days has become more realistic.its your opinion that it makesyour sadness go, but there are innumerable ppl around the world who feel very lonely only on this day.sorry but i think differently

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accra, ghana, west africa
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