Valentine's Day Poem by divyanshu gupta

Valentine's Day

Rating: 5.0


at a crack of day,
on saint Valentine's day.

he came to me
and asked time

for a gift for her.

I said to him,
to get a dim
red roses for her

he does the same and
and wrote the name
of his sis on it

he told me that
she is the one
most lovable then anyone

Friday, February 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is my first poem and I know it has many mistakes
but it is inspired from a real experience of mine
a small boy asked me about Valentine's day
I told him that it is the day when you give some gift to a girl you love (according to his age I thought it would be a appropriate answer)
on
the day of Valentine he asked me to refer a gift for a girl I told him to buy some red roses and a card.
he does the same and gifted it to her sister and told me that she is the girl he love most
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 02 February 2020

Write comment. A good start, Divyanshu. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Priyanka shakti 03 February 2018

Very nice...

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Divyanshu Gupta Dev 26 February 2016

thanks for comments

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Nishi Kumari 27 February 2016

A very sweet poem....loved it...

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Soul Watcher 26 February 2016

As a first poem, I think it's fantastic, I really liked it. Thanks for sharing

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divyanshu gupta

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giridih, jharkhand
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