Silver Star - 3,567 Points (04.08.1994 / Balindar, Burdwan, West Bengal, India,712134)

Valentine Value - Poem by RAJAT GHOSH

In the far country green
I will go with my dream,
Hand in hand in this sand
I will leave to tighten band.

On the day of Valentine
You will be again mine,
Sleep covers my eyes
And all are not lies.

Rose, teddy, hug, kiss,
I will not anything miss,
Promise would utter words
To walk lifelong long yards.

The dawn breaks the dream
And I lie amidst the frame
To paint the pain of real,
To hug my soulmate soil.

On Valentine, pairs I count,
Of bricks and of lovers' mount,
Beside beautiful big brick-field
Where work is only life's shield.

Topic(s) of this poem: reality

Form: Verse

Comments about Valentine Value by RAJAT GHOSH

  • (2/14/2018 7:29:00 AM)

    Thank you very much...@Dr Dillip K Swain (Report) Reply

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  • (2/14/2018 7:27:00 AM)

    Thank a lot sir...your metaphoric words are the inspiration for me.....@B.m. Biswas (Report) Reply

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (2/14/2018 5:14:00 AM)

    A lovely poem on the eve of Valentine's Day! You have brilliantly placed the poetic imagination into perspective! Thanks for sharing...10 (Report) Reply

  • B.m. Biswas (2/14/2018 3:39:00 AM)

    So sweet a poem, eat this poem by chewing not by swallowing.... grab the taste.......

    The spontaneous flow reminds me Wordsworth on poetry......spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 14, 2018

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