Valentines Day Comments

lovely. Our love is composed of an infinite force Which occurs when I hold you tight. Our bodies may become fragile Our hearing or eyesight poor But when I hold you, at the end of the day, I know that our love will endure.

it seems Valentine's Day is preferred over Valentines Day. i checked. :)

hallmark might ask you to capitalize. esp. since you did capitalize V. Day. i liked the story, the telling of it, and the rhyming. thanks for sharing. i give it a very good, a rare mark for me to give. i most enjoyed: Our love will outrun distance itself, . ya know, i read it again and have decided to score it excellent, only the second poem i've scored as such in this contest.

An enchanting poem that flowed and rhymes well and was a joy to read.