Valmiki(3) Poem by Binayakumar Mohanty

Valmiki(3)

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O' Poet!
Agni, the fire
was you
the uncontrolled one.

Grown up well
in the sun shine
in the river bank
body and soul
both ablaze always.

Ablution and sacrifices
browned your shoulder and arms.

From your father, the great sage
you learnt
contemplation and meditation, though
dreams and thoughts
restless
kept burning inside you.

your fathers admirable speech and action
path for salvation
seemed a detour, an error
to you
like smoke
emerging from
moist fuel wood.

Your thirst was your sorrow.

Flesh and bone
appeared more real
than mind and soul.

Was it your fault?
O' dear poet
Why so repentance!
why a penance!

Tuesday, December 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: humanity,sin,transformation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Valmiki the great Indian sage who narrated epic Ramayan once lived a sinful life of well known bandit Ratnakar. However the plot, characters and contents in this poem are purely fictional bear no resemblance with any thing mythological.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 21 November 2018

From your father, the great sage you learnt contemplation and meditation, though dreams and thoughts restless kept burning inside you. flesh and blood appeared more important to you than the soul........ a very fine sentence. your mind is on its path to contemplation. thank u dear poet. tony

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 12 December 2017

Your thirst was your sorrow.wow what a nice poem sir thanks for shearing a lovely poem 10++++

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Binayakumar Mohanty 21 November 2018

Thanks dear for such loving comment.

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