Valmiki(4) Poem by Binayakumar Mohanty

Valmiki(4)

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O' Poet!
Why so repentance?
why a penance?

For all path
appeared same
virtue and vice
ugly and nice
you could not resolve
darkness from light
at all your sight.

No book, No look around
brought you the inner peace.

You were burning within.

Lovers making love
mothers soothing their children
farmers sowing seeds
removing from crops
the wild growing weeds
mourners weeping over the dead
tailors inserting the thread
into the needle hole
appeared before you
the stank of lies.

The animal, the carcass
the stone, the wood
and water
all appeared same.

You were fragmented
and fragmented within
finding no outlet
of darkness all around.

O'poet!
whose was the fault?
Why regret!
Why so repentance?
whya penance?

Tuesday, December 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: humanity,sin,transformation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Valmiki the great Indian sage who narrated epic Ramayan once lived sinful life of well known bandit Ratnakar.But the plot, contents and characters in this poem are purely fictional and bear no resemblance with any thing mythological.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ansuman Srichetak 29 November 2018

Virtue and vice Ugly and nice Appears same. Purely transdental.

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Ansuman Srichetak 21 November 2018

The Animal the carcass the wood and water all appeared same.What a realisation!

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