Vampire Kiss Poem by Pia's Poems

Vampire Kiss

Rating: 4.5


A stinging kiss,
Something not to be missed.
A slight pain in my neck,
He hasn't started yet.

Holding me tight, Seeing within,
Slowly the dizziness starts to kick in.
I fall to my knees, This is the end,
No more lies, Hatred or trend.

I fall to the floor, Darkness sneaks in,
My transformation is soon to begin.
In his cold arms i let out a gasp,
We can truly be together, at last.

I open my eyes,
Finally seeing through the lies.
He smiles as my fangs extend,
This is the beginning of a bloody end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aishwarya Tandon 12 July 2009

hey pia, nice style of writing, u seem to be obsessed with vampire things, good going girl, hardcore imagination! ! ! !

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its brilliant! have u got insipired by vampire movie or book

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rago rago 29 June 2009

eloquent presentation and let the kiss stay long..............

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