better than emo girl

Vampire Kisses

Lustful whispers in midnight dreams,
Upon satin bed under moonlight gleam,
Restless figures begun to undress,
Fingertips and torsos meet to caress,

Mouths now merging, oh so bittersweet,
Gasps of pain as teeth and tongues meet,
Canines sinking into cherry soft flesh,
Saliva mingles with blood so fresh,

Fingernails scraping across tingling skin,
Pleasure grows from carnal sins,
Breathing heavy as heart rate grows,
Agonising bliss as juices flow.

Sharpened blades making bloody gashes,
Heart beating peaks, each body lashes,
Thrusting, shaking, all through the night,
Bathed in sweat and blood and cool moonlight,

Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 10, 2008

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  • Black Rose . (2/13/2009 2:21:00 PM)

    this is the story of my life... do u desire or live a life same as mine?

    xooxoxxxx Black Rose

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  • Arabian Heart (6/7/2008 11:43:00 PM)

    a vampire desire you wish
    such tederness can be a sin
    write more of your vampire love
    and you may meet sweet bliss

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  • Quiet Storm (4/16/2008 6:26:00 PM)

    yikes! .....sounds like ur a little too into halloween.....well in my opinion i would just retire from poem hunter after posting that one.....poems represent feeling and emotion....not which halloween character u want to have to have babies with......ill give this one a negative 12

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  • broken hearted (2/28/2008 7:31:00 PM)

    this poem is sp awsome i love it

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  • Golden Heart (2/23/2008 5:21:00 PM)

    God this is so tasty
    Like a piece of cake after a dinner that didn't fill you up
    LUVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVIn it! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    greatest poem so far
    one of my favorites

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  • Kat , sorrow (2/22/2008 1:11:00 AM)

    WOW...I love it...sexy...good work
    Love
    Kat sorrow

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  • Lantiz De'ruin (2/21/2008 5:10:00 AM)

    very...hot! luv it! please write more

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  • (red) harley (blue) suici (1/15/2008 12:54:00 AM)

    *hisses* u r repeced

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  • Ewigi Liebe (1/11/2008 1:22:00 PM)

    you did it well, hope you will submit more...you got a very interesting work on your ages...keep on penning.

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  • James Creamer (1/10/2008 10:06:00 PM)

    ok i'll admit that your a very talented writer. i know see what you mean by vocabulary. very nice. but i still like simple poems, very simple.

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  • Suicide King (1/10/2008 3:50:00 PM)

    Nice little work of imagery at least lol

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  • John Nightingale (1/10/2008 11:20:00 AM)

    I really enjoyed the poem and I thought I'd say that even if you don't care. Sometimes it's nice to be complimented.

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  • Bethany M.Bethany M. (1/10/2008 10:36:00 AM)

    That is a really good poem if you don't mind me saying! The imagery is great! nice work, i also liked the format and how the words flow.
    'A true poet makes the words flow, as for those who are not true leave the words a mesh of letters'
    ~Beth

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