Veiled Departure Poem by Noor Ehan
Veiled Departure
I sense the last gulp of air
Letting down a fallen bird
Dislodging itself in measured ways
Just as solemn promises did
In the breathing silence
Of a veiled departure, long ago…
Tonight yet again,
Bleak reticence
Fills the sultry skies
Rustic sands hum softly
Our last inept goodbyes
Ages of silence cull no space
Our withered years run out of pace
Yet sweetly chime a dream forlorn
In whose calm memory,
We shall live on
Until the night should come upon
The sanctuary of our lonely hearts.
Beautifully created write, you're visuals explode out of this poem.. A fine piece..thanks for sharing. all the best Jon
A sublime start with a nice poem, Noor. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.
hmmmm... very delightful to read..... thanks....
Amazingly beautiful poem, , rich in thought and well chosen words, , i am impressed by the simple eloquence in thses lines 10
Your word structure is wonderful... a really good read - thank you 10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Filled with beautiful and delicate imagery... thank you! It is a delight. Frank