Veiled Lament Poem by Bert Bell

Veiled Lament

Rating: 5.0


as frail as a wishbone, she
sits at the table by the window,
sipping her sherry in a haze

of blue sadness, waiting for
him to walk through the door
as he always does after

a long day at the office he
hates so much. she plays with
a strand of hair, and casts

her eyes on the place-setting
she has laid out for his
dinner. she brushes away

a tear, and leans on her
elbows, cradling her chin
in an open palm, almost

smiling, perhaps at a memory
of him, who she now accepts
she will never see again.


Bert Bell 2016

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 09 June 2020

Well articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with conviction. A sad story of love nicely put together.

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Roseann Shawiak 07 June 2016

Poignantly heartfelt, loneliness falls like a blanket upon the mind while reading this poem, the sorrow of loss seeps into the picture you have painted through your poem, a lasting image is seen now. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 24 May 2016

Very well written. A vignette of loneliness and sorrow

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 May 2016

A beautifully crafted very touching poem highlighting the deep sorrow after losing a near and dear one that accompanies one through out life. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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