Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 520,664 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Venture In Open - Poem by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Venture in open

I get another day
The sun may shine all the way
I shall go out with purpose
To get something and not to lose

It is thanks giving
And forgiving
Whatever happened yesterday!
It was forgotten day

I shall move an inch forward
With word
In mind
For firm ground to find

I may err
But bear
The consequences for lapses
And near misses

“Poor and helpless human being” as we are often called
I shall prefer not to be stone walled
But venture in open
To feel an earth as living heaven

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/30/2015 1:22:00 AM)


    “Poor and helpless human being” as we are often called
    I shall prefer not to be stone walled
    But venture in open
    To feel an earth as living heaven
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2015



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