Thursday, November 20, 2014

Venus Personified Comments

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She stood there pouting, adopting a film star pose,
As her curvaceous virile body, pushed shape into her clothes.

She perched on her stiletto heels, threw back her blond hair,
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Alan Bruce Thompson
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* Sunprincess * 20 November 2014

............her attitude comes alive in this write.....nice...

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Kim Barney 20 November 2014

Great poem. Based on a true experience?

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Alan Bruce Thompson

Alan Bruce Thompson

Newcastle upon Tyne, United Kingdom
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