Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 519,029 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Verses Form - Poem by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

To write well doesn't amount means to fight
It is well within ambit and right
The words come out in form of spirit of light
That flashes across mind and travel straight

The readers are wise enough
To pick what is smooth and what is rough!
A path that can satisfy their urgent need
Put control over worldly things and greed

Real poet is one that makes you laugh
Remains with you in happiness till last
Share grief with solace in real sense
Without adding any fuel to make you tense

Some of the poets unnecessarily force their views
Never come out of moon light and it's over view!
We can praise the nature but not exactly in imagery
It has something to do with human nature and misery

Many people prefer dark for the want of real guidance
That can't be provided by good books at once
It has to have ever lasting effect with bold assertion
Not to have any excuse at last minute of desertion

It is known from first instance
When words are put for acceptance
Readers come out with emphatic yes
Or no with annoyance on their face

I shall put it bluntly
The poems should not go silently
It has its own role to play
Remain at heart and permanently stay

What after all is the verses form?
When people remain loosely attached and well informed
We are committed to human cause
We can't afford to have even little pause

Comments about Verses Form by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2012 7:50:00 AM)

    Heather Burns this is a word of wisdom dear Hasmukh. You have expressed yourself so well here. great read. hb
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2012 7:49:00 AM)

    Pat Bennett I love your rubaiyat poem form.....very strong poem with a great message to poets....I write what my heart tells me to write...thank you for this!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2012 7:49:00 AM)

    Mahmud Tokon We are committed to human cause
    We can’t afford to have even little pause! !
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/24/2012 10:45:00 PM)

    Diwakar Pokhriyal that's a great write sir, totally marvelous and I completely agree with this. Beautifully written piece: -) (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/24/2012 10:36:00 PM)


    Tim T6 minutes ago
    All i say is brillant I'm speechless
    Comment +1
    very well written
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/24/2012 10:36:00 PM)

    Chamay Papi9 minutes ago
    i wish i had your words in my heart for 1 hour so my heart would speak an endless master piece, God blessed you with wisdom, use it for his glory. thx for shareing looking forward to read more
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/24/2012 10:15:00 PM)

    To write well doesn’t amount means to fight
    It is well within ambit and right
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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 24, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 25, 2012

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