Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 741,990 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Vicious Circle - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

The whole world revolves around
As suitable match is found
There is different story to tell
Everything goes smoothly and well

Stars may shine and twinkle
Moon may spread the light of candle
Nothing is taken note of
Even if passers by watch and laugh

It is delicate stage
It comes with advancement of an age
How can we blame natural change?
When blank space won’t be liked on page?

Life can change the course
If there is determination of course
You need suitable partner
She can take care and act as Gardner

It is nice to spend few moments
With dead silence and no comments
Only with few whispers and small gestures
To decide the destiny and future

We might have not taken notice
As it was the occasion to commit promises
Life may push any time to extreme corner
We have to realize it later or sooner

The pre-selection stage is extremely important
The decision are taken on the spot and instant
It may shape the whole life cycle
And place safely out from vicious circle

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/12/2011 9:09:00 AM)

    The pre-selection stage is extremely important
    The decision are taken on the spot and instant
    It may shape the whole life cycle
    And place safely out from vicious circle
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 12, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 14, 2011


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