Friday, June 12, 2015

Video Blues Comments

Rating: 4.8

My husband has a crush on Myrna Loy,
and likes to rent her movies, for a treat.
It makes some evenings harder to enjoy.
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Mary Jo Salter
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Barry Middleton 07 May 2016

Very amusing and well done villanelle.

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Chinedu Dike 12 June 2015

It's probably a vain glorification of beauty and nothing more to it. I like the articulation of the piece and the rhyme scheme. The poem is unique and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 June 2015

Woah this was so unique n humoured. Its easy for men to fall for movie actresses esp coz they dress and makeup them into flawless sexy women. U wrote this I a funny lyrical style with an adorable refrain wow. But can he ever meet his onscreen crushes? Would they have him? . I don't tink so. Kudos for the poetry. Pls do review my latest poem too.

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Mary Jo Salter

Mary Jo Salter

Grand Rapids, Michigan
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