Monday, January 9, 2017

Vikings Comments

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On sharp black rocks the sea sloughs,
Snaking new channels, sharp as its abrading sound.
Its profound insidious motion cleaving hollows
As the living brain shapes pathways
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Tom Billsborough
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Annette Aitken 12 January 2017

Some beautful visuals within this one Tom, I was on that boat. ready to conqueor. ARGHHHHH! ! ! ! ! nicely penned. Annette

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Susan Williams 11 January 2017

You have the greatest imagination, Tom. I think I already know this and then you write another poem and again I am blown away by your imagination. My brain is a Viking bravely forging through new oceans of knowledge and navigating new trade routes between harbors of discovery. Well done, my friend across the pond!

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Tom Billsborough 12 January 2017

We are all Vikings exploring new ground. I reckon you'd be a leader of the band setting your feet on new shores and giving us new horizons with you brilliant writing. Thanks for your comments.

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