Friday, September 29, 2023

Vingt, Èrshí, Twenty Comments

Rating: 5.0

You've probably seen them everywhere,
the grinning, happy, carefree teenagers,
mere children really.
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anais vionet
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Kingsley Egbukole 30 September 2023

Congratulations on being twenty or twenty something. With maturity comes some responsibilities and the excuses of the past can no longer hold. Beautiful poem

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2023

*** old bag: American slang: 'an ugly or ill-tempered woman' OK, anais, I THINK you 'have a few years left'. : )

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2023

Have you ever WORN a 'shrug'? ? What's a 'teenager'? ? ? AND, yes, you are an 'Old Bag***' now!

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anais vionet 04 October 2023

A teenager is someone between 13 and 19

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2023

Vingt, Èrshí? [ at the age of 20? ? ] anais, STOP using Chinese or....? [[ I'm 'too old' for 'this'! ! : ))))

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Denis Mair 29 September 2023

Thanks for leaving a breadcrumb trail so we could revisit our own teenage glow, however vicariously.

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Denis Mair 29 September 2023

Now it is time to bedeck PoemHunter's fusty halls with loose-leafed pages from the manual you are compiling: NEGOTIATING YOUR TWENTIES

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