Virus Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Virus

Rating: 4.7


Her words almost killed me
First time she used the word “you” instead of we
So much hatred and no love words
I almost sank praying the lords

How one can send the disease and virus
How, all of sudden, love can have minus status
I failed to understand her tears and outburst
It had simple appeal and powerful thrust

Virus had caused tremendous loss
She had nothing left in the name of cross
All her life time work was just vanished
Peaceful aim and meaningful life perished

She blamed all it to me in person
I was no where responsible for the reason
I too lost all my precious creation
Blame game for me was out of question

Everybody may be victim of this virus
No need to cry or create the fuss
It is how we protect and go further
Nothing should deter us or bother

I failed to convince her of my part
I had no way but to say bye and depart
What left behind was only distrust?
One should not bank upon simply trust

It may deceive you any moment
You should keep watch on every movement
Who knows when one may change mind?
Blind faith may lead you to new kind

Life is all about to love and to be loved
It depends on how one has behaved?
It looses charm if lacks integrity
One should have real sense and ability

She begged to know the real truth
I had no answer to speak from mouth
What do I know about virus as layman?
May be answer lying with honest and God’s man

I wished I could cry for her loss
I had every reason to feel remorse
I could feel only sorry for her state
I failed to convince her cruel fate

She blamed all it to me but did not curse
All she wanted to know the truth and nurse
Poems, literature was her only achievement
What was left to her was only astonishment?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 24 December 2009

Meaningful, didactic poem, well penned.

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Darshna Chopra 06 September 2010

So much hatred and no love words I almost sank praying the lords

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Louis Rams 29 December 2009

love is a virus and it attacks your soul, which can leave you empty or leave you whole.

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Kassiah Gervaise 26 December 2009

it's a very sweet poem...and forgive my honesty it was a bit boring when i read you're words i don't believe them i see it as just a story i don't really know if this has happen to you of not but what i do know is is that you need to write about things you understand and don't force things to rhyme a poem is anything that you make it to be...anyway thats all i will say here thank you and have a good day.

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 24 December 2009

Don't know what took me so long to check out this one..? It really deserves more than the words i'll say. :)

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 24 December 2009

Meaningful, didactic poem well penned.10.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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