Voiceless heart...
...Voice To The Voiceless...
Nights hears always my voiceless...
feels my feelings and what runs into my heart and mind...
and sees your face waves into my mind through my eyes...
unbearable! ! ...
even my nights can`t stand with...
crying with me her absence...
sweetheart...
love you, saying it with a full mouth...
from the depth of my heart...
may it reach you there...
there where you are so far from me...
but here your soul housing inside me...
sweet angel...
i wove a frame from my ribs to your picture...
and made my eyes its guardian...
and gave it my heart to be its servant...
to serve and give it my love...
sweetheart...
need me to say more...
to say what i keep inside..
if i tried to describe the love which i hold inside me...
all papers in the world are not enough...
because you are so much to me than this world...
you are the queen of my poetries...
my life..
my present..
my future...
and the dream of my life...
sweetheart..
you are the spirit which i live because...
you are my breathes...
so could i live without you...
my happiness are between your hands and inside your heart...
make me happy please...
bless me please...
and grant me your love...
give me my happiness...
by: hazem02@yahoo.com
''sweetheart.. you are the spirit which i live because... you are my breathes... so could i live without you.'' It is a poem very romantic and passionate and I am very sure that there is a very beautiful girlfriend who deserve these extraordinary lyrics.......10+++
beautiful and sensitive love poem, you have a warm heart, thanks for sharing it!
a beautiful love poem indeed... it puts a smile on my face as I read it.. Thanks for sharing it... ^-^
Hi Hazem, as I told other poets in the past I wish to read a poem about love without reading a single word such as heart, happyness, bless, dream, feeling and let just the raw emotions guide the pen (or the keyboard) . The reason for that is poets are the blacksmiths of language and using age-old cliches diminishes the strength of their message. By using a word that is obvious people people do not perceive it as adding much meaning to the communication.If your lover tells you she loves you every 5 minutes you might give her a smile, but if she only tells you 'I love you' on your birthday then you know she really means it and it becomes special to you. I also know that in middle east cultures, concepts are not expressed bluntly as in the west, but more like browsing of the mind. The poet build an intricate pattern of words all in the same stile and the message reaches the audience like a tidal wave. There is value in that of course, it is called tradition. I for one like modernity and so wish to see something new every time, something that makes me think of something in a different way....why does the night make you feel voiceless? Explore that feeling... I hope the above helps and as always the above is my modes personal opinion... enea
wow...this poem is breath taking and beautiful....good job...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
sweet angel... i wove a frame from my ribs to your picture... and made my eyes its guardian... and gave it my heart to be its servant... to serve and give it my love... so sweet and romantic words of love and its pain....well stirred throughout nice one! ! !