hazem al jaber

Adorable Chocolate...

Adorable chocolate...



melt me...

melt me as a sweet candy...

sweet chocolate...

that chocolate which you adore...

chocolate that you never be shared with anyone..

only you and your lips...

melt me...

taste me as your adorable chocolate...

start from the first of your lips...

till you get me there..

there between your tongue and throat..

keep me there to stay..

stay giving you a sweet nectar from me...

there keep sucking me as that chocolate which you adore...

keep do...

don`t stop...

till you get the last sweetest dropp of me...

melt me...

be drunk of the chocolate which i am giving you now...

are you drunk now..? ? ...



by: hazem02@yahoo.com

Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 14, 2009

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Comments about Adorable Chocolate... by hazem al jaber

  • poppl (11/9/2017 9:42:00 AM)

    pooooooooooooooooooooooo

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (5/28/2015 7:15:00 PM)

    The sweet, delicious and succulent taste of chocolate well depicted in the poem. No wonder many people crave for it. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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  • Aminath Neena HaneefAminath Neena Haneef (9/27/2009 4:16:00 AM)

    Its beautiful. erotic, sensuous and provacative.... One would love to indulge......

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  • Char Pattrick (9/26/2009 12:35:00 AM)

    Nicely written, makes me think of fondue.

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  • Ewa Espling (9/5/2009 6:06:00 AM)

    .. I feel the beutiful tase of a pice of chocolate om my lips when i read your poem
    ... so beutiful written on a subject so close to my heart as chocolate......

    tanks a lot
    sincerly
    Ewa

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  • Bright Rose (5/19/2009 6:46:00 AM)

    that was TASTY, brilliant idea, so creative keep it up :)

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  • Alison Cassidy (5/16/2009 7:27:00 PM)

    Your taste for the erotic is expressed sensuously and sweetly in this delicious poem about love, desire and indulgence. A chocoholics feast. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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  • DaNa XxX (5/16/2009 1:11:00 AM)

    mmmmm very delicious and sweet poem....Certainly 10 from me! ! !

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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (5/14/2009 2:47:00 AM)

    What a nice poem:
    'melt me as a sweet candy...
    sweet chocolate...'

    10++

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  • Joseph Poewhit (5/14/2009 2:44:00 AM)

    Chocolate came from some vendor

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  • Lawrence S. Pertillar (5/14/2009 2:11:00 AM)

    What a seductive treat! For anyone who enjoys chocolate
    in all its many varieties. Nice.

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