Volition System Poem by Braja K Sarkar

Volition System

Rating: 5.0


It burns my domesticity!

There are restless clouds in the boat- journey.
That girl returns after selling self,
Leaves her embryo by the desolate road
And all these make the wind
Lose its heart!

Yet, the Nile flows with strange fastness:
Cleopetra dives into the river after
Undressing all her wears,
Then starts
Heated vibration at every system.

Desire triumphs at the end!
It deserves nursing of body and mind.

An one-eyed deer starts hermetic running.............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 January 2010

U turn at the end and …it’s the poetic twist... Cheers you’ve brought blooming beauty Dame Cleopatra And for 1 eyed deer 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Catrina Heart 22 August 2009

such an interesting unique theme.............................10+++

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Anjali Sinha 18 July 2009

The Nile flows Cleopatra dives and the deer runs his hermetic seal whatever another great write from you -the expert -10 anjali

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meaningful writing..very softly penned

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