In shadows unseen,
Eyes seek forbidden secrets,
Curiosity's gaze.
What the heck? Why not give this poem 5 stars? Let readers have their own opinions and maybe EVEN SHARE THEM here. : ) bri
SEX is, I think for most humans, at least from time to time, ...until 'Too Old' to even have with oneself....a universal attraction. Isn't it SUPPOSED TO BE? ? (CONT.)
I wonder if Adam & Eve, those characters in the Genesis story, knew anything about the possible consequeces of 'having ' with one of the opposite gender. (cont.)
One definition of 'voyeurism': 'The derivation of sexual satisfaction by watching people secretly, especially when those being watched are undressed or engaging in sexual activity.' It's not always about SEX. I was one AT LEAST one time in my long life.
I think it is the Haiku poem which is not supposed to use sentences. Hmm? 'Because of different languages' unique syllabic and grammatical structures, haiku have slightly different formats from language to language.'
One definition of the Senryu type/style of poem is: 'A verse form in another language modeled on the Japanese senryu, typically counting syllables instead of morae.' So this MIGHT qualify. : )
Maybe the Serpent told them? ? A & E didn't even have books or TV, DID THEY. Those came later. : ) bri
Adam and Eve had no parents or school teachers or friends (at first at least) to TELL THEM ABOUT....SEX! ! Well, ...ok, they DID have a 'FATHER', but only one.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I did not 'have to' hide in 'shadows'; there are other methods. But I might resort to using shadows IF there IS NO OTHER WAY!