Waiting Poem by ritty patnaik

Waiting

Rating: 3.3


when morning sweats
i just await,
someone will step in.
all of a sudden,
door bangs with noise,
i saw a palmfull of breeze,
walk in!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 09 October 2009

the selection of the words n their usage is brilliant, ritty....

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Indira Babbellapati 08 October 2009

a wonderful transferred epithet...

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Bob Blackwell 08 October 2009

Ritty, it must be hot, hot, hot. I can remember mornings like these. Bob

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