Richard Millar

Waiting - Poem by Richard Millar

Every day,
at exactly
the boy
the bike
comes bye-
He never stops...
Just pedals past-
Mudguards rattling.
The boy
the bike.
Does he see me?
Should I wave?
If I lift my hand,
Will he see
I'm blind?

Topic(s) of this poem: waiting

Form: Blues Sonnet

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Close your eyes to see.

Comments about Waiting by Richard Millar

  • (11/22/2015 4:33:00 AM)

    Very powerful images in few words. That which have left me in deep reflection....10 (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Kelly Kurt (11/1/2015 11:43:00 AM)

    All senses play a part. Thanks, Richard (Report) Reply

  • Fabrizio Frosini (11/1/2015 8:39:00 AM)

    ''Close your eyes to see''

    Thanks for sharing your nice poem and also the poignant note, Richard
    Be blessed
    (Report) Reply

  • Rohit Singh (11/1/2015 3:47:00 AM)

    seems like you took inspiration for this poem from a real life incident. (Report) Reply

Read all 4 comments »

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 1, 2015

[Report Error]