Waiting Call Poem by abhipsa panda

Waiting Call

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Oh Lord, you definitely carry the right,
to test my patience.
But from this painful sight,
I need an early clearance.

You have gifted this life,
decision will be yours only.
I am paying huge tariff,
things are not going jolly.

I trust you dear lord,
intentions of yours never rude.
I am that cage bird,
where master is always shrewd.

Waiting for your very call,
I am ready to bear the curse.
Waiting for you to break the wall,
condition of mine getting worse.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 14 October 2018

You have gifted this life, decision will be yours only. I am paying huge tariff, things are not going jolly. waiting for you to break the wall.......... in moments of sorrow and helplessness, we pray O God come to help me and free me from all my troubles. i am caged....... beautiful prayer. it touched me dear poetess.. tony

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Abhipsa Panda 14 October 2018

Thank you so much Sir for giving time to read my poem and commenting on that

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2018

I trust you dear lord, intentions of yours never rude. I am that cage bird, where master is always shrewd......nice poetic expression with a nice theme. Touching and impressive too. We are like the cage birds. We act as per the wish of God. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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Abhipsa Panda 14 October 2018

Thank you so much Sir for giving your time and appreciation

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