Sanjay Mehta

Rookie - 100 Points (14-03-1967 / Nagrota Bagwan)

Wake Up Call - Poem by Sanjay Mehta

His pain
For me
Disdain
Till
It
Touches my grain.

Arise
From slumber
For
His pain
His pain
Can.......................
Will be...................
Yes !
Is my pain
Maim
Maim
Maimed
By HIS pain.


Comments about Wake Up Call by Sanjay Mehta

  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/14/2012 5:42:00 AM)


    Sublime and to be honest an exquisite piece of poetry.Well done SIr..... (Report) Reply

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  • (9/4/2012 5:39:00 AM)


    The 'he' in the lines remains to be a person still to be sketched out for better analysis of what makes him. I liked your play with the chosen words and found the alliteration remarkably strengthening the short piece. Thank you for asking to comment (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 9, 2012



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