Waking Comments

Dear Unnikrishnan Ji, nice to know we share the same experience.

Dear Dennis, thanks for your suggestion but I would like to retain my original composition.

Isn't that greeting in itself a poem. What do you think about this addition, interpolation?

A good poem, nice thought... Though I wonder if your second stanza would be a bit better if it read this way:

Loved this one, specially. Because, it is my experience as well!