Walking Along Poem by John Florio

Walking Along

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The road of love we both had chosen,
And together we both had taken,
I'm in love, and you are aslo in love;
Then why did all these blames come up?
Neither you nor I am ever unfaithful,
And never tried making each other fool.

If the worlds ask me, what do I say
That you have walked separate way!
I thought we'd both reach one destination,
One day, we would end this separation;
We did nothing wrong, and felt no doubt,
Then how did this distance come about?

I have turned to ash without burning,
Since you got lost at the first turning;
Season changed; all the roads are rotten,
Some words in the heart are left spoken.
The point to which I'm left is awesome,
Who knows where we both have come.

Friday, November 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 24 November 2017

Such a great write, John.....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 November 2017

A beautiful write about love. Nicely presented.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

Love of road you have chosen beautifully to walk together but separation brings agony and pain and you walk alone is so sad. An amazing poem is wisely drafted...10

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John Florio

John Florio

Yangon, Myanmar
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