Sunday, July 4, 2010

Walking The Frog Comments

Rating: 4.0

I have a pet frog
We go frog walking every day at 6pm
He is fine until he sees another frog
He sniffs & then tries to jump
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Alan Draper
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Hazel Durham 13 October 2012

A really funny poem, i enjoyed it, great write!

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Danny Draper 05 October 2012

Great frog poem and strong finish. Hope he gets out soon.

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Martin O'Neill 17 June 2012

Maybe it's me but I sense a gentle polemic in this? Prejudice is a problem, no?

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Ruth Walters 17 June 2012

I think they should ban people eating frogs legs as the price of wheelchairs will go up; o))) In any case frogs need legs. Ruth

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Sonali Sings 04 January 2012

I too imagined myself walking with a frog..had many experiences with a dog..good :)

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Nimal Dunuhinga 07 July 2010

Learned a lot from your frog especially walking.

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Ruth Walters 05 July 2010

I found the last stanza especially funny Ruthie

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Marieta Maglas 04 July 2010

Wonderful poem with a perfect theme..Great work

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