Sunday, February 3, 2019

Walking With Pain Comments

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Walking was once such a pleasure
Now I walk with pain
I clench my teeth
And force myself forward
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Shalom Freedman
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Mahtab Bangalee 04 February 2019

beautifully said- I walk into the pain and with the pain and against the pain.. to reach the painless destination! /// excellent poetic expression

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 03 February 2019

Ailment or old age is painful.Very well written.

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Shalom Freedman

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