Feipeng Shang

Silver Star - 4,241 Points (China)

Want You To Be Relaxed - Poem by Feipeng Shang

Translated by Yiyan Han (c)
2008-03-15 (last modified 2018-01-03)


I won't let you walk on the seaside alone
I won't let you wait in bedroom on your own
I won't let your beauty be continually washed away
I won't let your youth fail to stage the show
I won't let you be depressed
I won't let you leave your hometown
I won't let you pine for me in the moonlight
I won't let you have a bath for too long
I won't let you wear a bra that's too small
I do want you to be relaxed, to act naturally
And let you sway joyfully like a rose flower
In the wind, and keep smiling

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Translation of a poem written in Chinese, as shown in the image

Comments about Want You To Be Relaxed by Feipeng Shang

  • Robert Murray Smith (1/3/2018 5:08:00 PM)


    Love has many shades and this poem puts up an umbrella to protect a loved one.10

    Robert
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    Feipeng Shang (1/4/2018 6:19:00 PM)

    Looks like it must have more than 50 shades ;)

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 3, 2018



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