War Poem by martha shaw

War

Rating: 5.0


Human mistakes,
lead to many breaks.
Families unmatched,
within shameless acts.
Plenty declare blood.
Taking lives like a flood.
Masks of horror,
show no empathy.
It's a cold place.
You'll leave there feeling disgrace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uriah Hamilton 15 March 2006

It makes me think everything is dark, keep writing! !

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William Jackson 14 March 2006

Your poem is very raw. I like it. It makes me think that home is the last place war should occur.

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