War Poem by Kailynd McGregor

War

Rating: 5.0


WAR
SHAKEN HEROES
WANTING TO LIVE
BUT WAITING TO DIE
SUFFERING

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoffery Tarquin 30 September 2006

i like this although, im joining the army =/ but anyway although it has little words, it has big effects, your a very good writer! phil

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Dustin Bennefield 28 September 2006

I have a poem that is similar to this called through soldiers' eyes you may like it. This was good nonetheless though keep up the good work I will read more

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