War Is Destructive Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

War Is Destructive

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War is destructive

It is destructive tactic to start
Battle lines are drawn with little spark
No one thinks of its miserable part
It is needs courage to show humanitarian act

Young and old all in same think race
Long aspiration and worry on the face
What country would get in return?
If it goes to war at any time in turn

The tempo may never die down
When battles lines are drawn
”Come what may” is decided with next move
The public has confidence with and strength to prove

”Mind well” it is popular will to fight
Everything has gone proved very right
The wish and anger was given long wait
Now it was to meet with the aspiration and fate

Leaders have fooled us under the name of liberty
Democracy is allowed to rule with misery
Rules are there but meant only for suppression
They enjoy complete facilities with concession

Not a day passes of without any scam
Billions are swindled off with calm
Yet no action is initiated for the want of proof
The judiciary is helpless, alone and aloof

The war is easy way to divert public opinion
So much high price they have pay for onion
Meal a day has now become luxury
Where else they will take poor with misery?

*Gandhian principles stand with relevance even today
It has shown courage and glorious way
The tide and turn can be favored in public interest
The resistance offered is unique and best

*Ghandhian philosophy: - advocated by M.K.Gandhi.

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welcome michael n ganesh a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Ganesh Maharaj likes this. Ganesh Maharaj Beautiful and thought provoking, truth is being exposed.14 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 Vineetkumar Thakur likes this.

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Shahpur Kalan likes this. Seen by 8 ke · 1 Hasmukh Mehta welcome du kriplani n rajendra a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Stephen Adinoyi well done. ur message is meaningful. but ur attemt to make every line to ryme has lessened d 'poeticness' of dis poem. forcin some rymes makes d poem wordy and some lines clumsy. to a look again, avoid forcin rymes. it is not all gud poems that must rymes 8 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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2 people like this. Nick Clark The above picture isn't war. It's precision defence against the war like. 8 hours ago · Like Nick Clark They're totally cool. They're wielding Barrett M-109's. You meet one of these pro's while out walking, you ask him his life story... Remember whatever he says... Tremendous. Absolutely tremendous. 8 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Nick Clark Actually... I think only one is a Barrett M-109... the other is a slightly different muzzle. Can't recognise. 8 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Nick Clark But don't worry. These chaps. They're holding it down. Fly whisper to Echo Three... (World is saved now, bruv) .....See More 8 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Nick Clark (Later model Lee Enfield I think) . 8 hours ago · Like Nick Clark Do snipers start wars? Or finish them? 8 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Nick Clark BAM! 8 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Hasmukh Mehta aoo depends on prepardness a few seconds ago · Like Hasmukh Mehta welcome jaya n lavin a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Bede 'Didi' Okoro likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Sir, a lovely didactic poem in great rhyme and rhythm is so very appealing! I wish all read this marvellous poem and benefit by it! Thanks for sharing, Sir! Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai Jul 04,2013

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Ramesh Rai beautiful write 21 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Jane Lynahan Karklin Seen by 11 Jane Lynahan Karklin and Ramesh Rai like this. RaFine write. 50 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Jane Lynahan Karklin Fine write. 32 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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